The New Sales Letter?

Are we seeing the end of the long copy sales letter? I doubt it, but there is definitely a new player on the field…

Enter Video Sales Letters

Several big name internet marketers have started using video sales letters in place of the standard written sales letter. I’m not talking about simply having video on the page, which is also becoming more and more common. I’m talking about nothing but a video.

Mike Filsaime, one of the most well know, respected and talented internet marketer recently ran a sale using nothing but a video. The sale is over, but he left the video up for others to study and learn how to make their own.

The stats:

When mike launched this sale, using nothing but the video he sold 600 units at $500 a pop, in just over 2 days! This was with no pre-launch of any kind. He just sent out an email to the video and sold out in 2 days and 6 hours. Truly amazing.

Case Study

After studying Mike’s video, Keith Wellman launched an offer using this same technique. He’s done a great study of Mike’s technique and hits all the major points of a sales letter – in video form. Go watch Keith’s video here and see if you can pick out the components of a sales letter adapted for video.

I will write a future article dedicated to my 14-point sales letter format (outlined below), and we’ll go over each point in-depth. For now, just try to pick these points out of the video and see if you can recognize each one. Then comment below and we’ll discuss it…

Look for:

  1. Headline (or “Big Promise”)
  2. Sub-headline
  3. Opening or Greeting
  4. Benefits List
  5. Unique Selling Position
  6. Build Credibility
  7. Build Desire – More Benefits
  8. Price vs. Value Comparison
  9. Guarantee
  10. Bonuses
  11. Remove Order Reluctance
  12. Ordering Info and Call to Action
  13. PS
  14. PPS

Action Steps:

To get you involved in this study I’m offing a $444 prize to whoever can find all 14 points first. Here’s how to win:

  1. Study this video
  2. Find all 14 points above in the video
  3. Post your answers below.

The first person to get all 14 right wins a year of Affiliate Silver Bullet for free, which sells for $37/mo, so this prize has a real value of $444! Good luck… ;-)

Example:

These are not correct, but here’s how to submit your answers:

  1. Headline – “You’re about to learn how to make the best peanut butter and jelly sandwich you ever ate!”
  2. Sub-headline – “If you love PB&J then this is the luckiest day or your life. Read on…”
  3. etc.

PS If no one gets all 14, I’ll give the prize to whoever gets the closest – just give it your best shot.

PPS Keith is taking this video down tonight at midnight, so watch it NOW!


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26 Responses to “The New Sales Letter?”

  1. Thomas on April 10th, 2008 at 2:02 pm

    Yes i have read through Mikes page and saw the video, pretty intersting to say the least, Mike is getting real these days, more to the point, on our small bank account levels sort to speak lol.

  2. Wanda Kurdian on April 10th, 2008 at 2:09 pm

    The video stopped halfway thru and wouldn’t finish.

  3. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 2:33 pm

    Hey Wanda,

    If you click the video itself it stops. Then if you double-click it, it starts again. Did you try that?

    Update:

    I just watched it again, so I don’t know why it would have stopped for you. Maybe try reloading the page and starting over…

  4. David on April 10th, 2008 at 3:47 pm

    Yes Dustin, we are seeing a big shift toward the video sales letter, in fact I catch myself not even reading a sales letter if it doesn’t included video of some sort. That was one thing that really appealed to me about the affiliate silver bullet system.

    Keep up the good work!

    David

  5. Thomas Sherry on April 10th, 2008 at 3:49 pm

    First thank u. I have a grate deal of thought regarding this. I have some of the same notions and do beleave this has grate potental and we should go one step farther as a matter of fact most people will be amazed some did not come up with it, sooner I want in could you please talk further on this issue?

  6. Wanda Kurdian on April 10th, 2008 at 4:02 pm

    The video stopped half way through. I didn’t do anything to it.

  7. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 5:08 pm

    Hey Thomas,

    You’re right – we have some catching up to do to get where Mike is. ;-)

  8. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 5:09 pm

    Hi David,

    Thank you! And that’s very interesting to find out that you skip a product that doesn’t have video. I wonder how many other people feel that way…

  9. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 5:11 pm

    Hi Thomas,

    You’re welcome and I’m happy to elaborate on anything you’ve got in mind… Do you have any specific questions? Or did you just want me to ramble a bit?

  10. Fauzi on April 10th, 2008 at 6:31 pm

    Hi Dustin,
    I saw Mike’s video, directly from Mike 2 days ago. The process of introducing the sales letter was awesome and wonderful. Though the price when refered to the bonuses offered might be reasonable, for me it was still too high. May be suitable to those who have some cash and already established in the Internet Marketing. I think for those who say money is nothing, then this is your opportunity and the right time to grab one. Thanks.

  11. Laurie Lacey on April 10th, 2008 at 6:35 pm

    Hi,

    Thanks for the interesting post.

    I have mixed feelings about video, largely because I
    live in a rural area and won’t have high speed until
    another four to twelve months. At the moment, I
    find automatic loading videos an annoyance, and will
    often leave the website or close a page, when I see
    a video loading.

    My impression of video will likely change, when I
    routinely have a high speed connection. However,
    the written word has been around for a long time,
    and will not be replaced easily. I think it will always
    remain effective, as long as there are intelligent
    people who can read.

    I would remind marketers that there are still a
    large number of people with slow internet connection
    speeds. To rely on video, alone, is to isolate a
    large number of potential customers. As well,
    I would rather have a choice as to whether I
    want to see a video. I think it would be much more
    customer or surfer friendly, if videos would not
    load and play automatically.

    My best regards,
    Laurie

  12. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 7:09 pm

    Hi Fauzi,

    You’re right, Mike’s offer was more for people how had some sort of business already established. And that’s one of the things I like about Keith’s – it’s for either someone with an established business or someone with no business at all. He does a great job of removing obstacles in this video, see if you can pick out where he’s doing that…

  13. Dustin on April 10th, 2008 at 7:16 pm

    Hi Laurie,

    Get that high-speed asap! ;-) Just kidding. You make a great point, and we do tend to cater to high-speed connections, but we haven’t forgotten about you.

    It’s just that dial up almost a thing of the past. For example, when I look at my Google Analytics (which I’ll be writing a whole article about in the future) it tells me that only 4.17% of my visitors are on dial-up. Nearly 70% are on T1, cable or DSL. The remaining 26% are unknown.

    So on the flip-side of this issue, you can consider that the prevalence of high-bandwidth content is pushing the infrastructure development….and getting high-speed connections to you faster.

  14. Peter Fry on April 11th, 2008 at 12:47 am

    I tried a video email and got a good response. Yes the video does have impact (except I look like Shrek lol)

  15. Michael on April 11th, 2008 at 8:02 am

    Hi,

    I say yes, we are not yet seeing the end of the long copy sales letter. I doubt it too, and Yes there is definitely a new player on the field… and like every Player that is worth his salt knew already that video sales letter is the new wave of all intenet marketing tools.

    Much still depends on how fast video downloads could be achieved and watched, for some of the videos sent me, I have not been able to watch many because of the problems faced with Adobe Flash player update download.

    If downloading flash players persist in frustrations, I must confess that we are not seeing the end of copy letters, though they could always be short and precise contextual letters.

    And to all Internet Fortune Hunters out there, I am very optimistic that great opportunities abound bountifully with
    video sales letter.

    Thanks and Cheers for all the effort to sanities the info jungle.

  16. Valeriy on April 11th, 2008 at 9:16 am

    Dustin Hello! In a video shown good idea super. It is very difficult to translate, to be done with captions. I liked the theme build desire – more benefits. There are many variations to play on human hot buttons. This is the way to work. Let’s see what will in reality. Valeriy.

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  18. Duane Palmer on April 12th, 2008 at 12:25 pm

    Hi, I hope this is what you’re looking for.
    Good blog, & good idea for getting people to post on your blog!
    (I learn by watching other marketers – what they do, more than what they say ;-)

    1. Headline (or “Big Promise”) – “Exclusive & extremely limited offer”
    2. Sub-headline – we’re trying to protect it’s value, …you won’t see this again & price will surprise you.
    3. Opening or Greeting – want to thank you for loyalty, here’s my daughter, etc.
    4. Benefits List – Answers to problems you’ll be facing that keep you from making fulltime online income – like technical problems. “My system has given me the lifestyle of my dreams”
    Complete step by step biz in a box. “a proven step by step roadmap anyone could follow” no more confusion
    5. Unique Selling Position – “We’ll show you a real business we set up for you that when used correctly will earn you between $3k-$5k per month online”
    6. Build Credibility – we created zEZweb as answer to the technical hurdles people face. People wanted whole system – each of 4 individuals we coached went on to earn 10,000/month. “Million dollar march” gave success to others like we’ve never seen before.
    7. Build Desire – More Benefits “My system has given me the lifestyle of my dreams” as well as students of million dollar march”.
    8. Price vs. Value Comparison “Many products out there, hundreds of paths, but no real road map – too many directions.
    Many wanted next level – a website & product created for them” so we came up with the “Plus” system. Perfect system & package would cost over 10,000, but we wanted to create something more affordable. You get proven system with traffic generation (997 value) & Million dollar march system people paid 997 for to create multi-million dollar biz from scratch, total proven niche website that gets sales (2997 value), targeted list, viral traffic, affiliates selling for you, residual income, focused overview, software package(including mind-mapping software), one hour of personal mentoring, 2 tickets to 2500 event, real value of over 10,500 – only $499.
    9. Guarantee – 100% no risk guarantee, try it, if you can’t make at least 3,000 per month online within 60 days of applying system, let us know what you did & we’ll either work with you until you’re making that, or refund 100% of your payment.
    10. Bonuses – go extra mile this time – your own product and website plus traffic, we’ll lose money for your gain
    11. Remove Order Reluctance “Offer to exclusive people, build loyalty, to those smart enough to invest & love us forever” We address everything needed for success
    12. Ordering Info and Call to Action – only small number will be sold. Go right now before page is taken down.
    13. PS – If you know you need this, don’t wait for video to end – just go now.
    14. PPS – if you’ve been marketing for 6 months to 4 years & want more, this is for you. If you’re newbie, this is for you. If you think you know about making money online, but don’t have the cash – this is for you. If you want easy step-by-step push button system, this is for you. Thanks for watching, go now!

    I hope that’s close to correct, & I really need that 1-years worth of your membership! Thanks for the offer.

  19. John Reed on April 12th, 2008 at 2:22 pm

    I was very pleased to see Mike back in action again, I got worried when all I saw from him was offers for “Damaged Sets” of old information.
    He sold me on this product, but I couldn’t afford the price for the big offer, especially as I’m not yet established enough to use it all.
    Watching Keith’s video just had me chomping at the bit waiting to get to the point – “How Much”? Frankly it didn’t inspire me enough to make me wait all that time to find out – it wasn’t personal with just some form of powerpoint presentation and I didn’t rate it at all.
    Videos are all very well, but as with a sales letter a lot of “readers” want to be able to see the bottom of the page quickly to see if it’s worth wading through the pitch. If I can’t do that i usually move on – time is short and most of these videos are too long! Those based on the short You Tube format are actually better – I can watch one, sort out a task or two for my wife, come back and watch another etc – Alex Goad had it pretty well sussed i thought – and he definitely reeled me in!!
    John Reed, York, UK

  20. Bob Anderson on April 12th, 2008 at 3:20 pm

    Dustin;
    Hi. I tried to view the video at 7:00 p.m. on Saturday evening, 16 minutes later I am still waiting to view the video. I know I have a slow internet connection only 100 kps. But if the video was done in a flash format I could have been viewing the video instead of writing this comment on your blog.
    I know that all videos that I record with Camtasia I save in both formats just for this reason.
    I hope that sometime tonight the video loads so I can see it.

  21. Diane Corriette on April 12th, 2008 at 5:20 pm

    I answered yours and added a couple more. It was a great video to watch and if this is your marketing ploy to get people to buy it worked. ;) As a single mother who has spent the last 3 years online and the last 12 months full time working 10-12 hour days, is in alot of debt (well over $60,000) I need something that will work fast for me. I know what to do and I am just missing the system!

    I totally believe in my personal ability to do this, now I just need some marketing help and this package sounds great.

    Anyway on to the 15 points……..

    1. Headline (or “Big Promise”)

    We want to give you an exclusive and extremely time limited offer to thank you for your loyalty

    2. Sub-headline
    Only a few will be sold. they dont want to sell a ton of them

    3. Opening or Greeting
    Introduced himself and his daughter

    4. Benefits List
    Not selling a ton (market wont be crowded)
    business in a box package
    everything you need to run an internet baed business and earn
    a package to earn a minimum of $3-5,000 per month giving you a full time income

    5. Unique Selling Position
    step by step process to complete business success
    build your own squeeze page
    offer digital download
    build your list
    place your payment button on your site
    membership site
    even his grandmother would be able to use this (its not hard)

    6. Build Credibility
    worked hard to build credibility, built reputation by mentoring people to build their online business. These people have made thousands
    testimonial after testimonial with real successes people actually doing it they get emails every day

    has allowed him an awesome lifestyle, lives healthy, buys what he wants when he wants it, able to travel and get all the things he can get, cruises, etc

    but not just him but his students too get what they want out of life. there is a reason you are not successful and its because you are using a system that doesnt work

    Many are using million dollar march to take it to the next level

    6a. problem they are addressing for target market
    techical skills stop people moving ahead so they created a tool to help people overcome that zEZweb
    there is alot of information out there that gives some great information but you have no real road map because you are over loaded with too many direction, video marketing, product creation, social media, blogging
    there’s a whole bunch of different things to make money but not one is giving you the full system that you need so you are over loaded without a clear direction

    7. Build Desire – More Benefits
    People needed the whole step by step process to making a full time income because that was another problem that people faced that’s when they started to develop million dollar march. People achieved results – 10,000 in under 60 days using the system by 4 individuals. launched the program to the public and completely sold out teaches from beginning to end sold for $997 but no longer available

    8. Price vs. Value Comparison
    what do you need to build a full time income online.
    1. a proven website
    2. a product that converts
    3. traffic and lots of it
    4. affiliates that send more traffic
    5. a list to earn money over and over
    6. a long term plan so your money stream doesnt dry up
    7. software to help you do all these things

    perfect package was worth over $10,000
    they are selling for $497

    9. Guarantee
    100% no risk money back gurantee try it out use it put it to the test if you cant make at least 3,000 online in 60 days they will work with you until you make that or refund 100% of your payment

    they have to protect the value of this kind of offer only a small number will be sold so they will sell out and it will be gone

    10. Bonuses
    Tickets to summit or replay if you cant make it

    11. Remove Order Reluctance

    price is not 2,997 not 1,997 price is $1,400 not 997 right now you can get package of 497

    Enjoy success in weeks instead of years. imagine a few weeks from now you are pulling in 3-4,000 from your new product, building a list from that. a full time income from home in a matter of weeks. We’ve left no stone unturned. everything you need is right there

    all they ask in return is their loyalty because they are missing out on alot but they are hoping it builds loyalty

    12. Ordering Info and Call to Action

    Go to the website now, don’t wait for the video to end

    13. PS
    if you have been marketing for 6 months to 4 years and you know you want to add dollars to your bank account this is for you

    14. PPS
    if you have been working hard online and dont have the cash to show for it this is for you (THAT’S ME!)
    if you want an easy step by step push button system this is definitely for you

    15. Scarcity

    page is going to be gone before many have a chance to see the emails
    likely they will never do it again

    it will sell out, he apologised alot. if you know you need this dont wait for the video to end just go to the link now and I’m sorry if its not available
    go now before it sells out and the site is taken down

  22. Geraldine McIllwain on April 12th, 2008 at 5:45 pm

    1.Total business in a box – every component needed to succeed
    2.Worth $10,000/realized can’t sell for $10,000
    3.Had so many asking for more after 1mil dollar march
    4.takes care of confusion, no road map, no need of whole lot of different products
    5.still looking for way to make it affordable for newbies and seasoned marketers. Finally decide to take a loss and sell system as a Plus system with all componets & software for price that those wanting to take their businessess to the next level can afford.
    6.uses exact system/has freedom to buy, live healthy, travel, motorcycle, wife, foreign travel, awesome lifestyle
    7. what is needed/proven product, traffic, affiliates, list, long term plan, software to keep product working, video player, audio player, document, web edit, oto software, flow charts.
    8.pkg. over $10,000 with traffic to make 1/4 mil from scratch.
    niche (you choose from several listed), proven conversion website, salesletter for niche chosen, you can edit website (make it your own), propriety high quality, convert & sell, laser targeted list, flood of viral traffic, affiliate, JV partners, money on demand, residual income. Overview of $10,000 system, not $2,997, $1,997, $1,497, $997, will be $497.00.
    9.100% guarantee if not making $3000/mo in 60 days, all money refunded.
    10. 2 tickets to $1mil dollar march in Atlanta, GA cost $2400, 1 hour with personal mentor to go to next level/pick brain
    11.no stone left unturned. Only ask for loyality. System if all parts used with take a matter of weeks not months to make $3,000 to $4,000/mo.
    12.go to Privateorderlink.com/go before the link is removed. Can’t express enough that it could be down already. Only a set number of Plus System VIP Auto Pilot Profits Systems available.
    13.Add to bank account, newbies, step by step, add push buttons, Plus pkg. comes overloaded with all needed to generate $3,000-$4,000 in matter of weeks not months for the price of $497.00.
    14. go before video finishes, go to order link. Get there before it is taken down.

    Sounds good, but the majority of people I talk with as I recruit for my business, do not have $497, including me. For those that can afford it, coming down from $10,000 to $497 is a very welcome price.

  23. Ken Lair on April 12th, 2008 at 6:09 pm

    I know that this is getting promoted well. This is the 14th e-mail in the last 3 days that I have gotten on this video from various people. Does any one besides me have a problem with the 28 min time on this video? Have you ever heard of an executive summary? To take or give 28 min away for an unknown isn’t desirable to me. Let me know in less than 3 min and then let me click on part 2 for the full details. Think of it as a headline and the body of the page. You could even have a little popup person give a 90 sec headline so a person can decide.

    I literally fell asleep when it was running. The video player doesn’t have a slider bar quick queue tool to be able to actually find the important stuff or replay stuff you missed (cause you FELL ASLEEP!!).

    REMEMBER: when you do video or an audio with slide show talk to the person who is your audience and viewer like a friend. Be personable and have interest in the other person. Don’t try to be interesting. Interesting is “look at me, look at me.” I (audience) get nothing FROM you (speaker) if I am giving you attention and you are only receiving the admiration of being looked at and having my attention flowed to you. Just consider how much you liked a person in the past that was stuck up. You could probably have lived without them.

    Taking 28 min to get to the point requires a lot of attention going to you and if I’m falling asleep I’m not going to get the message and buy.

  24. Susan O'Dea on April 12th, 2008 at 9:02 pm

    Hi Dustin,

    Looks like I missed out on watching the video! Would have loved the chance to have been a FREE ASB player.
    Paying $444 for the privilege of being an affiliate is still worth it! Anyone reading my comment, I urge you to listen and learn from Dustin, I certainly will be.

    Thanks for offering the chance.

    PS I sympathize with Laurie as I live in outback Australia, where my letterbox is 5 kilometers from my house. But, video is the way of the future, and rural or not, we have to accept the fast lane!

  25. Marrijane on April 13th, 2008 at 6:45 am

    Giving the case study a go!

    1. Headline – We’ll show you a real business we set up for you that when used correctly will earn you between $3000 to $5000 per month online.
    2.Sub-headline – The price will surprise you.
    3.Opening – Hi this is Keith Wellman and I’m excited to bring you an exclusive…..
    4.Benefits list – What you’ll need to earn a full time income online……(7 bullet points+Features listed as well)
    5.USP- Introducing The “VIP AutoPilot Profits+ System”
    ….with this package we’re addressing everything you need for success.
    6.Build Credibility – Why are we doing this? …….
    7.Build desire- more benefits – My system has given me the lifestyle of my dreams….not just me but my students as well.
    8.Price v Value Comparison – What’s included? (Value of each listed)
    9.Guarantee – !00% no risk money back guarantee…….
    10.Bonuses – None!
    11.Remove order reluctance – If you’ve been marketing for 6 mths…..
    If you’re a newbie….
    If you think you know a lot….
    12.Ordering info and Call to Action – Only small number sold…Price one time $497…..(link)….If you know you need this don’t wait for the video to end just go to….
    13.PS – It’s your easy step by step, push button system….
    14.PPS – ??

    This is the first time I have attempted to study a sales letter so thanks for opportunity.
    Hope I’m not outrageously off the mark:)

  26. Ron on April 21st, 2008 at 2:05 am

    HI
    Just a note i have 8 meg broadband and yet some of these vid sales pages jump n jitter hahah oh and 4gigddr ram incase its asked i won it all in a competition yipee
    Anyway to be serious i agree that vid is super as a tool to show information however as a sales letter i dont like it due to needing my speakers off at night and what of those that are hard of hearing once subtitles are added like some are already doing it will be the best pluss they do make you jump sometimes
    if you sound is up hahah hey maybe that is a good thing hahah
    Take care
    Ron

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